Célie’s Game


A Note from Célie Baptiste, “Mama” Mercy Baptiste, Odette Baptiste, & Clara Baptiste

We are Baptiste women—storytellers, keepers of names, daughters of tricksters, guardians of what is ours.

This ain’t just a story about land. It’s about what gets stolen, what gets forgotten, and who has the nerve to take it back. It’s about knowing when to let a man think he’s winning, knowing when to let him play himself, and knowing when to lay down the last card.

Célie Baptiste knew that better than anyone. She set the pieces in place long before we got here, left a game behind, waiting to see if we could play it right. Her story don’t rest in paper or deeds. It lives in the hands that hold it next. That’s us. That’s you, if you listening right.

Mr. Scott Bryant? He didn’t try to make this story his. Didn’t try to tell it for us, didn’t try to rewrite the rules. He knew his place at the table and never once reached for the deck. He figured his name didn’t belong beside ours. We told him otherwise.

You don’t play a game alone. And you don’t let a story like this go untold.

This ain’t history laid down in a book to gather dust. This is a story still breathing, still whispering through the bayou, still waiting on the next move.

We remember. So you best remember, too.

— Célie Baptiste, “Mama” Mercy Baptiste, Odette Baptiste, & Clara Baptiste

BASE IMAGE PROMPT — THE BAPTISTE WOMEN (FOUNDATIONAL)

IMAGE TYPE:
Naturalistic photographic realism, restrained and unposed.
No stylization. No mythic framing.

SCENE:
Three African-American women standing together on rural Louisiana land — a porch or yard near the bayou. The environment is humid, grounded, and lived-in. Vegetation is present but not romanticized. The setting feels real, not cinematic.

SUBJECTS:
Three women of different generations:

Mama Mercy Baptiste — older, maternal, steady. Her presence is protective and grounded, not mysterious.

Odette Baptiste — middle-aged, alert, sharp-eyed. Reads as capable, observant, and unafraid.

Clara Baptiste — younger, quieter, attentive. Watches more than she speaks.

They stand close enough to clearly belong together, but not posed or symmetrical. Their relationship is evident through proximity, not gesture.

APPEARANCE:

Natural hair (varied styles appropriate to each woman)

Plain, practical clothing in muted, earth-toned colors

No jewelry meant to signify symbolism

Clothing and posture reflect daily life, not performance

They look like women who live here.

LIGHTING:
Natural daylight or soft overcast.
No dramatic shadows.
No glow.
No emphasis lighting.

EXPRESSION & POSTURE:

Calm, composed, untheatrical

Expressions neutral to serious, not emotive

No direct engagement with the camera

Authority is quiet and collective

CAMERA & FRAMING:
Eye-level perspective.
Medium-wide framing.
No central hero composition.
The camera feels present but uninvited — as if it arrived mid-moment.

TONE:
Grounded. Real. Contemporary.
Nothing mystical. Nothing explained.

EXPLICIT EXCLUSIONS:

No supernatural elements

No symbolic props

No mythic or folkloric cues

No visual resemblance to an ancestral figure

THE BAPTISTE WOMEN — LIVING LINEAGE LOCK

IMAGE ROLE (LOCKED):
This image represents the living Baptiste women — Mercy, Odette, and Clara.
It must establish continuity, not myth.

Célie Baptiste must not be visually echoed here.

CORE DIRECTIVES (NON-NEGOTIABLE)

Preserve realism and restraint

Maintain African-American identity without emphasis or explanation

Distinguish lived authority from ancestral presence

Anchor the women in daylight, not legend

TARGETED ADJUSTMENT — WOMAN IN BLUE (MAMA MERCY)

PRIMARY GOAL:
Reframe her authority as maternal, grounded, and present — not withheld or enigmatic.

REQUIRED CHANGES

AGE & PRESENCE

Age her subtly upward (reads clearly as elder relative, not mythic figure)

Emphasize warmth through posture, not expression

Authority should feel earned through years, not carried as mystery

HAIR

Adjust hairstyle to clearly differ from Célie:

shorter locs, pulled back, wrapped, or more practical arrangement

Hair must read functional, not symbolic

EXPRESSION

Shift from inscrutable → watchful

She is observant, not unknowable

Viewer should feel she is aware of them, not withholding herself from them

POSTURE

Protective, steady, slightly forward-leaning

Reads as the one who has held the family together

Not centered as a figure of myth or gravity

CLOTHING

If blue remains, mute it slightly (weathered, faded)

Avoid deep, saturated tones associated with Célie’s night image

Fabric should feel worn, familiar, domestic

GROUP COMPOSITION (ALL THREE)

HIERARCHY

No single woman dominates the frame

Power is collective

The eye should move between them, not stop at one

RELATIONSHIP

They stand together, not posed

Slight differences in stance reflect personality, not status

Clara reads younger, Odette sharper, Mercy steadier

LIGHTING

Natural daylight or soft overcast

No dramatic contrast

No nocturnal or mythic cues

EXPLICIT EXCLUSIONS

No resemblance to Célie’s visual language

No withheld facial access

No mysticism, glow, fog, or symbolic framing

No sense that the viewer is intruding

These women are present, not elusive.

FINAL AUTHENTICITY CHECK

FAIL if:

The woman in blue could be mistaken for Célie

One figure feels iconic or archetypal

The image feels staged or illustrative

PASS only if:

The women read as unquestionably alive and contemporary

Authority feels communal and inherited, not supernatural

The image feels like a moment that existed before the camera noticed

FINAL LOCK STATEMENT (FOR THE MODEL)

This image does not explain lineage.
It shows three women who already know it.

Archival Note
Célie’s Game is a foundational story within the Her Stories / Her World archive. It is not preserved as a closed narrative, but as a living inheritance—one that establishes how power, land-memory, and women’s names are passed, tested, and protected.
The events recorded here are not meant to be resolved, explained, or universalized. They are meant to be remembered correctly.
Célie Baptiste does not belong to a single telling. She persists wherever women are asked to prove what was never meant to be surrendered. Future stories may echo her presence, invoke her name, or feel her pressure—but this account remains the point of origin.
This story is shared with care, and held with boundaries.


“Ain’t about what’s real, baby. It’s about what they believe.”
— Célie Baptiste

Célie Baptiste

Look at ‘em.

LUMIVORE V1 — CORRECTIVE PRESENCE PASS
CÉLIE BAPTISTE — AUTHENTICITY & WITHHOLDING LOCK

IMAGE ROLE (LOCKED):
Célie Baptiste is not revealed as a character.
She is registered as a presence — partial, restrained, and unclaimed by the viewer.

This image must feel observed too late or seen by accident.

CORE DIRECTIVES (NON-NEGOTIABLE)

Reduce spectacle

Withhold full access

Replace “magic” with credibility

Anchor her in lived reality, not mysticism

VISUAL ADJUSTMENTS (FROM EXISTING IMAGE)

LIGHTING

Remove overt magical glow

Card illumination reduced to a dim, ambiguous warmth (no halo, no aura)

Night lighting remains natural: moonlight, humidity, low contrast

No supernatural color casts

COMPOSITION

Reframe so Célie is off-center or partially cropped

Avoid full frontal view

Slight turn of the body or head — the camera does not receive her directly

Introduce foreground obstruction (grass, mist, branch, shadow)

CLARITY

Soften sharpness by one step (subtle grain, atmospheric diffusion)

Facial detail should not be pristine

Expression remains unreadable — not emotive, not performative

ACTION

Cards are mid-motion, not posed

Gesture feels habitual, not ceremonial

She is not “doing magic” — she is handling something familiar

CHARACTER AUTHENTICITY LOCKS

African-American elder woman

Lived-in face: fine lines, weight, history

Natural hair — unstyled, practical

Clothing plain, worn, appropriate to climate

No adornment meant to signify mysticism

Authority comes from stillness, not posture

IMPORTANT:
She must read as a woman who existed before the story noticed her.

ATMOSPHERIC CONSTRAINTS

No glowing eyes

No symbolic exaggeration

No mythic framing

No visual cues telling the viewer what to think

The image should ask:

Did I just see her — or did I imagine that?

LUMIVORE QUALITY TEST (REJECTION CRITERIA)

Reject the image if:

she feels iconic rather than incidental

the viewer feels “shown” something

the moment feels staged

Blackness is aestheticized instead of simply present

Accept only if:

the image feels quieter than expected

the power is implied, not displayed

the viewer feels slightly uncertain about what they saw

FINAL INTENT STATEMENT (FOR THE MODEL)

This is not an image of a magical figure.
This is an image of a woman whose presence alters the room — even when she is not centered in it.
MICRO-ADJUSTMENTS (ALL REQUIRED)

LIGHT

Reduce card luminosity by an additional 15–20%

Eliminate any sense that the cards are emitting light

Cards should appear to be catching ambient moonlight, not producing glow

No warm halos, no focal emphasis

FACE

Introduce slightly deeper shadow across the eyes and upper face

Preserve facial structure, but obscure expression

Viewer should not be able to confidently read her emotional state

CLARITY

Add one subtle layer of atmospheric diffusion (humidity, grain, mist)

Reduce micro-contrast on skin and fabric

Maintain realism — no blur, no stylization

COMPOSITION

Shift framing imperceptibly so she is less centered than before

Allow foreground elements (grass, reeds, shadow) to interrupt the lower frame

The camera should feel as if it stopped moving a moment too late

PRESENCE

Do not heighten mystery

Do not add symbolism

Do not clarify narrative importance

She is not revealed.
She is noticed.

FINAL AUTHENTICITY CHECK (PASS / FAIL)

FAIL if:

She feels iconic

The image explains her

The viewer feels invited to study her

PASS only if:

The image feels quieter than expected

The viewer senses they may have seen something they weren’t meant to

Her authority comes from stillness, not visibility

FINAL LOCK STATEMENT (FOR THE MODEL)

This image is not trying to show Célie Baptiste.
It is recording the fact that she was there — whether or not anyone believes it.

CANON NOTE (FOR YOU, NOT THE MODEL)

If this pass succeeds:

This becomes the only Célie image used in the archive

No alternates

No future reinterpretations

She remains fixed, withheld, and durable

That restraint is what gives her longevity.

Three Baptiste women, standin’ on land soaked with more than rain—St. Landry Parish soil, bayou clay and blood beneath it—land that don’t belong to nobody but them.

I been watchin’ a long time, waitin’ to see if they remember who they are. Where I come from—L’Anse Noire, out by the bend where the cypress roots breathe above the water—you don’t forget what’s yours. The land remembers, even when folks pretend not to.

Down here by Bayou Têche, names last longer than fences.

Mercy—they call her Mama Mercy now. She got a voice like an old hymn and a stare that make a man rethink his whole life. Ain’t much she don’t know, and ain’t nothin’ she won’t say if the moment’s right.

Odette—sharp as a blade, quick as a card cuttin’ the air. She’s the one who left, thought she was done with this place. Went north for a while—New Orleans, then Baton Rouge—but the bayou calls louder than traffic ever could. But she came back, ‘cause she know a good con when she see one.

Clara—quiet, but she listen too well. She got that look in her eye, the one that say she don’t just hear stories—she believes ‘em. And belief? That’s the most dangerous trick of all.

They don’t know it yet, but this ain’t just a fight over land. This is about who they are.

Who they been.

Who they gonna be.

And if they don’t play it right?

Well.

Ain’t no room in this world for a Baptiste who don’t know how to keep what’s hers.

LUMIVORE V1 — LANDSCAPE PASS
BAYOU LAND — EARLY / PATIENT / ORDINARY

IMAGE TYPE
Naturalistic photographic realism.
No stylization. No cinematic exaggeration.

SCENE
A quiet stretch of rural Louisiana bayou landscape.
Marshy ground with still water, reeds, low grasses, and cypress trees in the background.
Spanish moss hangs loosely from branches.
The land feels humid, flat, and lived-in — not dramatic, not pristine.

This is not a “beautiful” landscape.
It is an ordinary place that has existed for a long time.

TIME & WEATHER
Overcast daylight or very soft early morning light.
Humidity is present and visible in the air.
Light is diffuse, muted, and neutral.
No strong shadows. No golden-hour glow.

ATMOSPHERE
Air is thick and heavy.
Very light mist or haze may be present, but it must read as environmental humidity — not fog, not symbolism.
Nothing in the frame signals danger or mysticism.

COMPOSITION
Eye-level camera perspective.
Medium-wide framing.
No dramatic angles.
The horizon is low and understated.

The camera feels stationary, as if someone stopped briefly and did not compose deliberately.

COLOR & TONE
Muted greens, browns, grays.
Natural, unsaturated palette.
No color grading meant to enhance mood.

SUBJECT RULES
No people.
No animals.
No boats, houses, or human structures in focus.
No symbolic objects.

The land is present, not performing.

EMOTIONAL REGISTER
Patient.
Neutral.
Uninterested in the viewer.

The image should feel like a place that does not react to being seen.

EXPLICIT EXCLUSIONS

No cinematic lighting

No dramatic sky

No mythic or gothic framing

No visual foreshadowing

No beauty-as-spectacle

FINAL INTENT STATEMENT (FOR THE MODEL)
This image does not explain the land.
It records that the land was already here.

The Setup

“Mama” Mercy Baptiste

Baptiste blood been in this soil since cane first grew wild along the river. Folks say our great-grandmama worked the sugar fields near St. Martinville—knew every name of every spirit in the water, and maybe one or two that weren’t.

They been tryin’ to take this land since before I was born. Men with soft hands and hard voices, holdin’ paper like it mean somethin’.

They come drivin’ from Lafayette or Baton Rouge, wearin’ city shoes that sink in our St. Martin Parish mud. They don’t know this dirt’s been claimin’ men longer than they’ve been signin’ contracts. Always the same. They figure if they say “contract” and “legal” enough times, you’ll forget who put their blood in the soil.

I watch this one—Everett Kane—step out of his car, smooth suit, smooth smile, all that money confidence on him like cheap cologne. I don’t gotta hear a word to know what he come for.

“You must be Mrs. Baptiste,” he says, like he already owns the place.

I don’t answer right away. Let him sit in it. Let him wonder if he got the wrong house, the wrong woman, the wrong damn game.

Then, real slow, I say, “It’s Miss Baptiste. Never took to nobody’s name but my own.”

He hesitates—just for a second—but I see it. That flicker in his eyes. That’s the first crack.

“I won’t waste your time,” he says, slipping into that calm businessman voice. “I’m making an offer on this land. A fair one.”

Fair.

That’s a word men like him love to use. Fair like the price of a soul.

“This land ain’t for sale,” I say.

His fingers twitch. I know the type. Men like Kane don’t hear ‘no’ often. They hear not yet.

“It’s already been sold,” he says, real patient-like, like I’m slow. He pulls out a folder, all nice and neat, like paper ever stopped a storm. “The previous deed holder defaulted. I’m the legal owner now.”

I tilt my head, tap my cane once against the porch rail. Let him think I’m thinking. Let him think he got me.

“You ever heard of Célie Baptiste?” I ask.

His face don’t change, but I feel the shift. He don’t like not knowing things.

And that? That’s the second crack.

Odette

This man think he got us cornered. That’s his first mistake.

His second mistake? He think we play fair.

With arms crossed I started studying him. I’ve met a hundred Everetts before. The ones who walk into a room thinking they already won. Thing about men like that? They don’t know what to do when the game changes.

“Célie was our great-great-grandmother,” I say. “She left somethin’ behind in this land. You sure you wanna go diggin’?”

Kane scoffs, but I see the way his jaw tightens. “I don’t believe in ghost stories.”

That’s fine. He don’t gotta believe.

He just gotta run when the ghosts start talkin’.

Clara

I saw her before I ever heard her.

Célie Baptiste.

She was standin’ in the tall grass last night, shuffling cards slow, her hands barely touchin’ them. The mist rolled off the water from Bayou Têche, the same one Mama say run straight to where the spirits sleep. Her eyes caught the moonlight—dark, deep, knowing.

I ain’t never seen a ghost before. But I knew what she was.

“You got a test coming,” she said, her voice smooth as the river at night. “You gonna pass it?”

I swallowed hard. “What kind of test?”

She smiled—sharp, like the edge of a knife. “The kind that decide if you worthy.”

The wind picked up, rustlin’ through the trees, and when I blinked, she was gone.

Now, standin’ here with Mama and Odette, watchin’ Kane smirk like he already got us, I hear Célie’s voice in my head.

Make him play the game, but don’t let him see the rules.

I glance at Mama. She gives the smallest nod.

I glance at Odette. She smirks.

Alright then.

Let’s play.

The Game Begins

Odette

If there’s one thing I know, it’s that rich men hate feeling stupid.

Everett Kane walk onto our land acting like he got every card in the deck. What he don’t know is, we already stacked that deck before he even sat at the table.

“You sure you wanna go diggin’?” I ask him.

Kane scoffs, but there’s tension in his jaw now. He’s listening. That’s all we need.

Mama and Clara slip inside the house while I keep him busy, running my mouth the way I always do when I need a man to underestimate me.

“You ever play poker, Mr. Kane?” I ask, real easy, like we’re just chatting.

He adjusts his cufflinks. “I prefer games of skill.”

I laugh, shaking my head. “Ain’t no game of skill when the dealer got a stacked hand.”

That gets him. His nostrils flare just a little. He don’t like not knowing what I mean by that. Good. Keep him unsteady.

Behind me, I hear the house shift. Mama and Clara are setting the first trick.

Clara

We don’t need much.

A few small changes, a few whispers in the walls, and a man like Kane will do the rest himself.

Mama lights the first candle. “You remember what I told you?” she asks.

I nod. “Make it feel real before it is.”

She hands me the little pouch she made—dried moss, a pinch of bone dust, and a piece of old iron.

“Put this under his car. Make sure he don’t see you.”

I take it and slip out the back, quiet as the wind through the grass.

“Mama” Mercy Baptiste

Some folks need to see a ghost to believe in one. Others just need to think they did.

By the time I walk back outside, Kane’s got that look in his eye—the one men get when they think they shouldn’t be nervous, but they are.

“What’s wrong, Mr. Kane?” I ask, sweet as honey.

He clears his throat, glancing over his shoulder toward his car. “Thought I heard something back there.”

“Did you now?” I keep my face steady. “Bayou got a way of talkin’ at night. Always has.”

He don’t like that. He tugs at his collar, muttering something under his breath before shaking his head.

“I’ll be back tomorrow with my surveyor,” he says. “I don’t have time for stories.”

I nod, watching as he heads to his car. And that’s when the first trick takes hold.

Kane stops. Goes still.

His hands clench. He looks at the ground. Looks at his car.

He don’t say a word, but I see it plain as day—he feels it now.

The air, just a little too thick. The ground, just a little too soft. Like something’s watching.

He swallows hard, then gets in his car.

The engine stutters.

Then stalls.

He curses, trying again. The ignition clicks, clicks, but don’t catch.

Clara don’t move from the porch. Just watches. I see the way her fingers twitch, the way her shoulders tighten.

She don’t say nothin’, but I know.

This ain’t just our trick no more.

Kane finally gets the car started and pulls out so fast the tires kick up dust. I let him go. Let him think he’s in control.

I turn to Clara. “What happened?”

She licks her lips, eyes still locked on the spot where Kane was standing.

“She was there,” Clara says, voice low.

Mama and I share a look.

Célie’s playin’ now.

And that? That’s when the real game begins.

LUMIVORE V1 — LANDSCAPE PASS
BAYOU LAND — MID / PRESSURE / UNSETTLED

IMAGE TYPE
Naturalistic photographic realism.
No stylization. No cinematic dramatization.

SCENE
A different section of the same rural Louisiana bayou region.
The land feels closer, tighter, less open than before.

The ground is uneven.
Water edges are indistinct.
Mud, reeds, and roots intrude into the frame.

This is not a new place — it is the same land under different conditions.

TIME & WEATHER
Daylight, but later in the day than Landscape I.
Light is heavier, flatter, and more oppressive.
Cloud cover is thicker.
The air feels stagnant rather than calm.

No storms. No rain.
Just weight.

ATMOSPHERE
Humidity is palpable.
The air presses down rather than drifts.

No mist.
No fog.

Instead:

dense air

reduced visibility from moisture

heat without relief

The frame should feel uncomfortable to stand in.

COMPOSITION
Slightly lower camera position than Landscape I — closer to ground level.
Framing is tighter, more enclosed.

Foreground elements intrude:

grass

roots

reeds

dark water edges

The camera feels hemmed in, not observant.

COLOR & TONE
Muted greens darkened toward olive and brown.
Grays lean heavier, duller.
No warmth.

The palette should feel compressed, not expressive.

SUBJECT RULES
No people.
No animals.
No visible structures.

However:

signs of disturbance are acceptable (shifted mud, broken reeds, water marks)

Nothing explains why the land feels unsettled.

EMOTIONAL REGISTER
Uneasy.
Pressurized.
Impatient.

The land does not threaten.
It waits under strain.

EXPLICIT EXCLUSIONS

No symbolic framing

No dramatic weather

No gothic exaggeration

No visual metaphors

No foreshadowing cues

This is not danger.
This is pressure accumulating.

FINAL INTENT STATEMENT (FOR THE MODEL)
This image shows the same land as before —
only now it feels heavier to stand in.

The land has not acted yet.
But it is no longer neutral.

Odette

I expect Kane to stay gone a little longer. Maybe a week, maybe two. Give himself time to shake off the feeling he left with.

Instead, he come back next day.

That tell me two things:

  1. He think he too smart to be played.
  2. He too proud to admit he already doubtin’ himself.

Bad combination. For him, anyway.

His car pulls up slow this time, like he don’t trust the road anymore. Good. Let that unease settle in his bones.

Mama Mercy don’t move from her chair on the porch, just watches him like she got all the time in the world. Clara, quiet as ever, stands near the steps, eyes dark, lips pressed tight like she already know what’s comin’.

Me? I step down to meet him, smiling like I got no secrets at all.

“You sure got back quick, Mr. Kane,” I say, arms crossed.

He adjusts his cufflinks. “I don’t scare easy.”

That a lie. I hear it in his voice. Feel it in the way he won’t meet my eye for too long.

Good. Let’s see how much longer that hold up.

Clara

The air feel different today. Heavy.

Kane’s standing in the same place he was yesterday, but the land don’t want him here. I feel it.

And I ain’t the only one.

“She’s close,” I whisper.

Mama hears me but don’t look over. “I know.”

Kane don’t hear nothin’. He too busy talkin’, throwin’ out legal terms and threats like they gonna scare us more than this land scares him.

He don’t feel it yet.

But he will.

“Mama” Mercy Baptiste

I let him talk. Let him list his rights and ownership and all them little words he think mean somethin’.

Then I say, real easy, “Ever dream about drowning, Mr. Kane?”

That get him.

His mouth stops mid-word.

For a second, he just looks at me. “What?”

I nod toward the bayou.

“Ain’t uncommon ‘round here. Water creeps in your bones. In your mind. Folks hear things when they sleep. Wake up swearin’ they were sinkin’, but they bed still dry.” I pause, let my fingers tap against my cane.

“You sleep alright last night?”

The muscle in his jaw jumps. His fingers curl at his sides.

“I don’t believe in that superstitious bullshit.”

Oh, honey. He already halfway gone.

Odette

He don’t know it yet, but we got him on a string now.

Mama got in his head. That’s the first step. I see it in the way he rolls his shoulders, the way he glances toward the water, like it got closer since he got here.

He tryna shake it off, tryna act like he still in control.

So I help him lose a little more of it.

“Oh, shit,” I whisper, turning real sharp toward the trees behind him. “Did y’all see that?”

Kane spin around so fast I almost laugh.

“Ain’t nothin’ there,” Mama says behind me, all calm. “You scarin’ yourself.”

I hear how quick Kane breathes now. The way his fingers twitch, like he fightin’ the urge to check over his shoulder again.

He’s cracking.

One more push, and he’ll start seeing things we ain’t even gotta put there.

Clara

The moment he turns back to us, I see her.

Célie.

She standin’ in the grass behind Kane, just far enough that he don’t notice. She got her arms crossed, head tilted, eyes locked on me.

Watching.

She raises one hand, real slow, and points to the water.

Kane shift his weight like he uncomfortable, but he don’t move his feet.

I swallow. “Mama.”

Her gaze flicks to me. She knows I see somethin’.

Kane runs a hand down his face, muttering under his breath. “I don’t have time for this.”

Then he turns too fast, like he tryna prove somethin’, and his foot catches the root beneath him.

It happen so quick.

He stumbles.

The earth gives a little.

And for one second, I swear I hear water pullin’ him in.

His hands dig into the dirt. He grunts, pushes himself up, shaking his head like he dizzy. His shoes soaked through.

But the ground? It’s dry.

His face goes pale.

I don’t say nothin’. Just watch him.

So does Célie.

She smiles.

“Mama” Mercy Baptiste

He don’t say much after that.

Don’t look at the water. Don’t look at Clara.

Just wipes his hands, mutters somethin’ about “comin’ back tomorrow” and gets in his car.

We watch him go, wheels kickin’ up dust.

Odette lets out a slow whistle.

“Boy’s losin’ his grip.”

I nod. “Tomorrow, we end it.”

Clara don’t say nothin’.

Her eyes still on the bayou.

And when I follow her gaze, I see why.

Célie’s still standin’ there.

Smilin’.

Waitin’.

Odette

I wake up knowing today’s the day we finish this.

It ain’t just a feeling—it’s certainty. Like knowing a storm’s coming before you see the sky turn.

Mama’s already in the kitchen by the time I come in. Not making coffee. Not boiling water. Just standing at the table, rolling that old silver ring of hers between her fingers. A glass of tea, dark as river water, sits beside her, ice half-melted.

“He’ll be here soon,” she says.

I don’t ask how she knows. We all know.

Clara’s outside, sittin’ on the porch rail, eyes on the water. Ain’t touched her breakfast. Ain’t said much since yesterday, either.

She’s still with Célie, even when she ain’t lookin’ at her. I see it in the way her fingers drum against her thigh, slow and steady, like she’s countin’ seconds between lightning and thunder.

Mama slides a second glass toward me, condensation beading on the sides. “You ready?”

I take a breath. Nod.

“Then let’s end this.”

The Final Trick

Mama Mercy

I heard Kane’s car before I saw it.

That engine rattlin’ down the dirt road, wheels kickin’ up dust like the land itself was tryin’ to shake him off. House still standin’ same as always, but somethin’ felt different.

Like the land done been waitin’ on him.

I was already on the porch, rockin’ slow in my chair, glass of sweet tea restin’ easy in my hand. Ice long melted, but I weren’t in no hurry. Odette stood beside me, arms crossed tight, expression smooth as glass. Clara perched on the rail, quiet, watchin’. That child sees things before they happen.

And Kane? He ain’t like the way we lookin’ at him.

He steps out his car, straightens his jacket like that gonna help him. “This ends today,” he says.

I take a slow sip, let the glass clink against my teeth. The lemon’s sharp on my tongue, but my voice stays smooth. “It surely does.”

He squares his shoulders, tryin’ to sound important.

“I’m done with the games. If you don’t clear off this land, I’ll have it leveled by next week.”

Odette exhales, shakin’ her head like he a fool—which he is. She don’t even lift her bourbon, just lets it sit there, sweatin’ in the heat.

“You just don’t know when to quit, huh?”

Kane clenches his jaw.

“I don’t quit. I win.”

I let out a low chuckle, deep in my chest.

“Boy, you ain’t been winning since the day you set foot on this land.”

He don’t like that. I see the muscle in his jaw twitch. But instead of talkin’, he takes a step forward.

The ground sinks beneath his heel.

He stops.

Frowns.

Looks down.

That dirt too soft. Too soft. Like it don’t belong to him. Like somethin’ underneath is waitin’.

I swirl what’s left in my glass, watch the amber-colored tea catch the last of the daylight. Take a slow sip.

Then I tilt my head, voice real easy, like I’m talkin’ ‘bout the weather.

“Ever dream ‘bout drownin’, Mr. Kane?”

His mouth goes dry.

Oh, he feel it now.

Good.

Clara

I hear her before I see her.

The shuffle of cards, slow and steady. The hum of a song long forgotten.

Célie’s here. Right behind him.

She flicks a card up between her fingers. The Queen of Spades. Smiles.

“This is it,” she says.

The wind picks up. The bayou hums. The land shifts beneath Kane’s feet.

He sways. Takes a step back. The ground gives a little more.

“Stop,” he mutters, shaking his head. “I’m not falling for this.”

Mama Mercy leans forward. “Baby, you already fell.”

And then?

The ground caves.

Not fast. Not violent.

Just enough.

Enough to make Kane’s stomach drop. Enough to make him feel the earth pulling at him, dirt curling around his shoes, sucking him down.

His breath stutters. He stumbles back, heart pounding.

He looks at us, really looks this time, and I see it in his face.

He finally believes.

Odette

He’s shakin’.

Not just his hands—his whole body. He stumbles back like he expect the land to reach for him again.

And maybe it will.

“You—you can’t stop me from taking this land,” he stammers. But there ain’t no confidence in it anymore.

Mama Mercy just sighs. “Ain’t nobody taking nothin’, Mr. Kane. This land? It ain’t yours to have.”

His breath comes short and fast. He wipes a hand across his face, eyes darting between us, to the bayou, to the ground like he can’t tell what’s real anymore.

And that’s the moment he breaks.

“Fine,” he chokes out. “Fine. Keep the damn land.”

Then he turns and runs.

Don’t look back. Don’t slow down. Just peels out so fast his tires damn near kick the dust into next week.

And just like that, it’s over.

Mama lets out a slow breath. “There it is.”

I exhale too. “Damn. Thought he’d be harder to break.”

Mama shakes her head. “Baby, that man was never hard. Just loud.”

I laugh. She ain’t wrong.

But Clara? Clara’s still watching. Still listening.

And that’s when I realize—

It ain’t over.

Not yet.

LUMIVORE V1 — LANDSCAPE PASS
BAYOU LAND — LATE / AFTERMATH / EMPTIED

IMAGE TYPE
Naturalistic photographic realism.
No stylization. No cinematic resolution.

SCENE

A familiar stretch of the same rural Louisiana bayou land.
The location is recognizable as part of the same environment, but it feels emptier than before.

The ground appears disturbed and then settled again.
Water levels may be slightly altered.
Edges feel worn, not dramatic.

Nothing is actively happening.

TIME & WEATHER

Daylight, later than Landscape II.
Light is flatter, cooler, and thinner.
Clouds may be breaking or thinning, but no sunlight breaks through.

No storm.
No rain.
No clearing that feels earned.

ATMOSPHERE

The air is still humid, but the pressure has lifted slightly.
Not relief — just absence.

No mist.
No fog.
No heaviness pressing down.

Instead:

quiet air

muted soundlessness

a sense that something already passed through

COMPOSITION

Eye-level or slightly higher than Landscape II.
Framing is more open again, but not welcoming.

Foreground is less intrusive than before.
Negative space increases.

The camera feels as if it arrived after the moment was over.

COLOR & TONE

Muted greens faded toward gray.
Browns washed out.
Overall palette feels drained, not softened.

No warmth.
No renewal tones.

SUBJECT RULES

No people.
No animals.
No visible structures.

Subtle traces are allowed:

disturbed mud now smoothed

water lines on grass

bent reeds that have not fully recovered

Nothing points to a cause.

EMOTIONAL REGISTER

Quiet.
Residual.
Unresolved.

The land does not react.
It does not explain.

It simply remains.

EXPLICIT EXCLUSIONS

No symbolism

No visual metaphor

No “peaceful” framing

No sense of victory or healing

No closure cues

This is not calm.
This is what remains after pressure leaves without apology.

FINAL INTENT STATEMENT (FOR THE MODEL)

This image shows the land after something passed through it.

Nothing is fixed.
Nothing is restored.

The land has not chosen sides.
It has simply continued.

Clara

The wind shifts.

I turn slow.

Célie’s standing in the field, cards flicking between her fingers, but she ain’t smilin’ no more.

She looks at me, only me, and I feel it before she says it.

The test ain’t just about him.

She tilts her head. Raises an eyebrow.

And waits.

My throat tightens.

This was never about just running Kane off.

This was about us.

About whether we understand what it means to keep what’s ours.

I swallow hard, straighten my shoulders, and step forward.

“Alright then,” I murmur. “What’s next?”

Célie smiles.

And the Queen of Spades vanishes between her fingers.

Clara’s Acceptance

Clara

The land is quiet.

Not peaceful—waiting.

Mama and Odette think it’s over. That Kane’s gone, and that’s the end of it.

But I know better.

Célie’s still here.

She stands in the grass, arms crossed, watching. Not smug, not proud. Just waiting.

Because we ain’t done.

I take a slow breath and step off the porch. Mama and Odette don’t stop me, but I feel their eyes on my back.

Célie tilts her head as I approach. Flicks a card between her fingers.

The Queen of Spades.

The trickster’s card.

“What now?” I ask.

Célie smiles. “Now,” she says, “you decide what kind of woman you wanna be.”

“Mama” Mercy Baptiste

I don’t like this.

Ain’t a thing in the world more dangerous than an unfinished trick.

And right now, Célie got my grandbaby standing dead center in one.

I step forward, cane tapping against the dirt.

“Célie.”

She don’t look at me. Just keeps her eyes on Clara.

“You always had a soft spot for the quiet ones,” I say.

That gets a reaction. Célie laughs, real low.

“The quiet ones listen,” she says.

“And I been waitin’ a long time for someone to listen right.”

Odette

This don’t feel like a lesson no more.

Feels like a claim.

Like Célie ain’t just testing Clara. She’s choosing her.

And I don’t like that. Not one bit.

“What’s the trick, Célie?” I ask, crossing my arms. “You don’t do nothin’ without an angle.”

Célie hums. “Ain’t a trick,” she says. “Ain’t a lie. Just a question.”

She flicks the card in the air, and it hangs there longer than it should before landing at Clara’s feet.

“What’s the question?” Clara asks.

Célie smiles. Slow. Sharp. Knowing.

“The land’s yours,” she says. “But the name? That, you gotta earn.”

Clara

My mouth goes dry.

I feel the weight of it—the choice.

It ain’t about the land. Not really.

It’s about the name.

Baptiste.

A trickster’s name. A name that means somethin’. A name that carries more than just history—it carries debt, power, a weight you gotta be strong enough to hold.

Célie kneels, picking up the card, holding it between her fingers.

“You take this,” she says, “and you ain’t just Clara Baptiste no more. You a Baptiste woman the way I was. The way your mama was. The way her mama was.”

She turns the card over. It’s different now.

Not the Queen of Spades.

The Joker.

“You carry the weight of every trick that came before you. You see what needs seein’. You move how we move. You make the world play by our rules.”

She leans in close.

“But you don’t get to walk away. Not ever.”

I exhale, slow.

I know what she’s saying.

You take the name, or you leave it.

“Mama” Mercy Baptiste

I feel my breath catch.

Célie done pulled the last card, and I ain’t sure how it’s gonna fall.

I want to stop it. Want to tell Clara she don’t gotta do nothin’ for no ghost, not even for family.

But that ain’t my call to make.

This? This gotta be her choice.

Odette

I don’t like this.

I don’t like how still Clara is. I don’t like the way Célie watches her, like she already knows how this ends.

I don’t like that I ain’t sure I do.

Clara

I reach out.

Brush my fingers over the card.

I could leave it. Could walk away and still own the land, still keep what’s ours.

But I know, deep in my bones, that ain’t the point.

The land ain’t the inheritance.

The name is.

And the name ain’t just a gift. It’s a responsibility.

I pick up the card.

The moment my fingers close around it, I feel everything shift.

The wind goes still. The bayou exhales.

Célie grins. “That’s my girl.”

And just like that—

She’s gone.

“Mama” Mercy Baptiste

Clara’s still holdin’ the card when I reach her.

It’s blank now.

I swallow hard. “You alright, baby?”

She nods, but her eyes are distant. Different. Older.

Odette lets out a slow breath. “What now?”

Clara looks out at the land. Our land.

She smiles.

“We make sure nobody ever tries this again.”

And just like that—

The legacy lives on.

Epilogue – The Next Night

Clara

I hold the card between my fingers, turning it over, feeling the weight of something that shouldn’t have weight.

The edges are smooth, the surface blank. It ain’t the Queen of Spades no more. Ain’t even the Joker.

It’s whatever I need it to be.

Célie’s gone now, but she ain’t gone. She lingers in the hush of the wind, in the shift of the water, in the way the trees lean just a little toward me when I pass.

She don’t need to stay.

I know what to do now.

I walk to the edge of the bayou, toes sinking into the soft earth, the smell of moss and water wrapping around me like a whisper. The land watches me, the way it’s watched every Baptiste woman before me. Out here in L’Anse Noire, stories don’t die; they just go quiet till someone listens right.

Mama and Odette stand back, letting me have this moment.

I lift the card one last time.

Then, slow and sure, I let it go.

It flutters once, twice, before the wind carries it out over the water. It lands without a sound, floating for just a second before the bayou takes it under.

I exhale.

The night exhales with me.

It’s done.

But it ain’t over.

Not really.

Months Later

Clara

The first time someone tries to take what’s mine after Kane, I don’t even have to try.

The man at the bank smiles at me the same way Kane did. The kind of smile that don’t reach his eyes. The kind of smile that say he think I don’t know the game.

“You have a beautiful property, Miss Baptiste,” he says, flipping through his paperwork. “We’d love to help you turn it into something… profitable.”

I tilt my head, let him talk, let him say all the words he thinks will make me lean forward, interested.

Then, when he’s done, I set my hands real gentle on the table between us and say, “You ever heard of Célie Baptiste?”

His brows pull together. “Should I have?”

I smile. Slow. Sharp. Knowing.

“Oh, sugar,” I say.

“You will.”

The End


Reflecting on Célie’s Game
By “Mama” Mercy, Odette, & Clara Baptiste

“Mama” Mercy Baptiste

“Folks always ask me if the stories ‘bout Célie Baptiste are real.

I tell ‘em, depends who’s askin’.

Truth is, ain’t never been about what’s real and what ain’t. It’s about who walk away holdin’ the power when the tale is done.

Now, if you listen close, real close, you might hear her name whispered through the bayou. Might feel a shift in the air when you stand on land that wasn’t meant for you.

But I reckon, if you gotta ask if Célie was real, then you ain’t never played the game right.”

Odette

“Ain’t no lesson here ‘cept this—you either play the game, or the game plays you.

Everett Kane thought money meant control. He thought power was somethin’ you could sign your name on and own.

But what I learned from Célie, what I learned from all the Baptiste women before me, is this—power don’t live in paper. It don’t live in land.

It live in who tells the story.

And this story? It’s ours. Always has been.”

Clara

I used to think stories were just words. Just tales Mama used to tell me at night, just a way to remember the past.

I know better now.

Stories ain’t just what happened. They’re what you make happen.

That’s why we still talk about Célie. That’s why we still say her name.

Because long as the story’s still bein’ told, she ain’t never really gone.

And neither are we. Game’s only over when I say it is.

-“Mama” Mercy Baptiste, Odette Baptiste, and Clara Baptiste